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東南亞苗語翻譯

組織
(5分)

試題:

"1989´s Wiskey…" he said with a voice seemed to be desired of alcohol. Paul was once a man that was usually drunk every moment. That´s the reason why he was a homeless. He spent all his money on it. He started to drink, one by one, the bottle were enough to full a pakage!

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指考編號6:差-5

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本大題總分20分,首要測驗考生是不是能應用詞彙、語法、修辭常識、寫出切合主題、具統一性、連貫性之短文翻譯

總分
(20分)

指考編號4:可-11

文法、句構
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編制
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文法、句構
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Kris couldn´t remember anything that had happened during the drive to the police office.He was waken up by a thunderous sound, "What are you doing? Do you know where it is?" said the police officer. Kris was shocked to death but had no reason for explaination.

文法、句構
(4分)

內容
(5分)

參考謎底:第 2 題

When he opened his eyes again, he found himself in the police station. To his dismay, he didn´t remember what he had done yesterday. A policeman came up to him and scolded him angrily. He was too embarrassed to look up at him. He really learned a lesson from the impressing mistake.

Travel Is The Best Teacher

內容
(5分)

樣例

非選擇題各大題之參考答案和評分標準的申明,乃根據「九十七學年度指定科目測驗人工閱卷英文考科評分標準擬訂會議」彙整而成,以供各界參考。

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文法、句構
(4分)

編制
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文法、句構
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說明:主題清晰,但部份相幹敘述成長不全,有些語意表達不甚清楚翻譯有文法毛病,然尚未影響整體辭意之表達翻譯拼字及用字有誤,影響部門辭意之表達。標點利用稍有不妥。

申明:文謬誤題。

A police car came by and saw him. Paul thought it was a taxi and trying to stop it. The car stopped and Paul past out very soon on the car. Ten minutes later, Paul woke up with a started. He was in the police station.


組織
(5分)

字彙、拼字
(4分)

組織
(5分)

Travel is the best teacher, there are three reasons why I consider it. First, we can see anything what we have never seen by traveling around the world. Second, we can realize how different the culture is between us. Last but not least翻譯社 we can learn a lot of knowledge by ourselies which it have never appeared from the book.

Travel is The Best Teacher

字彙、拼字
(4分)

 學測編號9:劣-2

字彙、拼字
(4分)

至於各品級之評分樣例,可參閱選才通信第142期「學測與指考英文作文評分樣例」申明(http://www.ceec.edu.tw/CeecMag/articles/142-2.htm),該文以93年學測與指考英文作文為題所作之評分樣例。

Travel Is The Best Teacher

Last summer, I went to Malaysia with a foundation, I used to consider it to be a poor country翻譯社 but I was totally shocked at how prosperous it is! So many tall buildings and well-organized communities were right before my eyes! We also had some interaction with the local students. I found their learning attitude very active翻譯社 which was very different from that of the Taiwanese students.

文法、句構
(4分)

說明:略觸及主題,但成長不全翻譯雖嘗試用起承轉合詞,但因組織混亂致使文章前後不聯貫。因文法、拼字毛病過量,嚴重影響文意之表達。字數不足,另扣一分。

字彙、拼字
(4分)

說明:內容太少,細節描寫凌亂。全文成長,幾無組織可言。文法、用字、拼字毛病多,嚴重影響辭意表達翻譯字數不足,另扣一分。

總分
(20分)

內容
(5分)

Travel is the best teacher

組織
(5分)

指考編號1:特優-19

體例
(2分)

內容
(5分)

One evening翻譯社 a man went to a party.He drinked much CH3COOH and that he felt asleep.When the party was end he want to went home.He took taxi and sleep on the car.What can the driver do?When the man opened his eyes, he saw aand his family.

總分
(20分)

As a result翻譯社 the man wake up look the policeman, the policeman very angry said, "Were are you".Do you know?Then man said翻譯社 I don´t know." "Why I am here?"

評分標準:

學測編號7:差-6

One evening翻譯社 a man named Kris attended a wedding party. It was held in a luxury hotel翻譯社 where there were a lot of guests.

內容
(5分)

About 30 minutes later, Kris was allowed to leave. He was ashamed for his "trip to the police office." He appologized to the police officer for his irrational behavior, and promised that he wouldn´t do it again.

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One evening, there was a wedding party at a fancy hotel. The party´s atmosphere was so happy and all people including the guests and the new couples cheered to each other all night. Later, the party was over and every person was much drank.

內容
(5分)

Paul was already drunk. He didn´t know what was he doing翻譯社 and even where he was.

After the weding, My brother walked along the street and he wanted to take a taxi. Because my brother war drunk, no driver wanted to let him get on the car. Finally, my brother glazed at a car so he raised his hand and got on it. He fell asleep as soon as he sat. When he wake up翻譯社 he found he was in police station. How terrible he is!

組織
(5分)

組織
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組織
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編制
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These kind of story have happened very often in these day. People who don´t work or have no work are all marking around on the street. This really caused a great society problem. These things should be avoid in our life because we have a group of police who should be working for the people. Having these kind of questions can dissepear soon.

內容
(5分)

組織
(5分)

編制
(2分)

內容
(5分)

編制
(2分)

編制
(2分)

指考英文作文評分樣例

文法、句構
(4分)

提醒:請根據以下三張連環丹青的內容,以"One evening,..."開頭,寫一篇文章,描寫圖中主角所經歷的事件,並供應公道的解釋與終局翻譯

內容
(5分)

說明:主題清晰,但部份相幹敘述發展不完整,行文不甚流利,未能聯貫成長。文法及拼字毛病,已影響部分文意之表達。

試題:

4

組織
(5分)

學測編號1:特優-19

內容
(5分)

 

樣例

I very like to travel.I´m hope I can go to travel every country.

字彙、拼字
(4分)

0

申明:主題明白,內容論述相當具體且完整翻譯重點分明,組織具連貫性。文句富轉變,幾無文法錯誤(第二段第二句中a lots,應為a lot。)。辭彙使用妥適,稍有拼字的錯誤(例:第四段句中的explaination與最後一段中的appologized皆為錯字。)翻譯

總分
(20分)

During the winter vacation this year, I took a trip to Sigapore with my family. This was my first time to go abroad. In those four days, I learned a lot about this lively country, including saw the famous Merlion, visited the Indian temple ... etc. When the guide gave some informations for us at some spots翻譯社 I could merge them in to the geography class easily翻譯社 even could answer the questions from the guide. I was proud of that I could use the knowledge in books to the real life!

 

組織
(5分)

申明:主題之敘述完全,文意清晰翻譯組織上前後連貫,轉承語使用大致適合;句型雖有轉變,文法毛病少,但仍有用法與拼字毛病。標點符號亦稍有不當。

"What the hell do you thing you´re doing here?!" the man cried out. He quickly threw Paul out and trying to fix the mass Paul made.

字彙、拼字
(4分)

He didn´t know himself act so funny, and wave his hand for police car.The policeman took him to police office.

Travel Is The Best Teacher

1

組織
(5分)

One evening, a wedding party was held in a beautiful翻譯社 nice and high-class resturant . A homeless named Paul walked by and was curious to what was happening inside. He was starving, and was looking for a place to take a rest. The music was turned on so loud, and the food were smelling so good. Paul walked in without thinking.

指考編號5:差-8

  Travel can see a lot of country and study different educated.Some country have historic site翻譯社 some country have the religion, and some country have the technology etc.

組織
(5分)

一、英文翻譯

字彙、拼字
(4分)

One evening翻譯社 John was invited to his old friend´s wedding. Meeting so many classmates in university翻譯社 he became more and more excited. He talked a lot with other, laughed happily, and also, drank a lot.

文法、句構
(4分)

 

總分
(20分)

0

表一:英文作文分項式評分指標
等級
項目
主題 ( 句 ) 清晰貼題,並有具體、完全的相幹細節撐持。
(5-4 分 )
主題不夠清晰或突顯,部份相關論述成長不全翻譯
(3 分 )
主題不明,大部份相幹敘述成長不全或與主題無關。
(2-1 分 )
文舛錯題或沒寫(凡文差池題或沒寫者,其他各項均以零分計算)。
(0 分 )
重點分明,有開首、發展、結尾,前後聯貫,轉承語利用適當。
(5-4 分 )
重點放置不當,前後成長比例與轉承語使用欠妥翻譯
(3 分 )
重點不明、前後不聯貫翻譯
(2-1 分 )
全文毫無組織或未按提示寫作。
(0 分 )
全文幾無文法毛病, 詞句結構富轉變。
(4 分 )
文法毛病少,且未影響辭意之表達。
(3 分 )
文法毛病多,且顯著影響文意之表達。
(2-1 分 )
全文文法毛病嚴重,導致辭意不明。
(0 分 )
用字切確、得宜,且幾無拼字毛病。
(4 分 )
字詞單調、反複,用字偶有欠妥,少量拼字錯誤,但不影響辭意之表達翻譯
(3 分 )
用字、拼字毛病多,明顯影響辭意之表達翻譯
(2-1 分 )
只寫出或抄襲與題意有關的細碎字詞。
(0 分 )
格式、標點、巨細寫幾無毛病。
(2 分 )
格式、標點、巨細寫等有毛病,但不影響辭意之表達。
(1 分 )
違反根基的寫作體例或花樣,標點、大小寫等毛病甚多。
(0 分 )

One evening翻譯社 I went to one of my friends´ weeding in my black suit. I was happy that he married a nice girl. And I was so excited that I drank too much. On my way home, my head was dazzling and my feet were heavy that I couldn´t walk well. So I gave up walking home翻譯社 waving my hand to stop a taxi. Though I thought that taxi was strange with the sparking light翻譯社 I still got into the car and told the driver my address. Then I fell into a deep dream in the taxi. The next morning I woke up, I felt uncomfortable and tried to move my limbs to make myself awake. When I stood up, I found that I was in the police station instead of my bedroom. What happened last night? A policeman pointed at the police car outside and told me "That was the "taxi" you took last night, do you have any problem now?"

It was a place full of happiness翻譯社 grace and the most important thing翻譯社 food. Paul couldn´t stop himself from putting the food in his mouth though his mouth was already full of food. While he was eating, he saw a bottle of wine.

體例
(2分)

申明:內容與圖意不甚符合,相幹敘述成長不全,部分語意不清晰。組織不夠聯貫,最後一段偏離主題,與前文所敘述內容不符。文法及拼字毛病,影響部分辭意之表達;標點利用稍有欠妥。

97指考英文考科非選擇題評分標準申明

申明:內容雖說起與主題相幹之事物,但未能就主題充實發揮。重點發展不全,第二段結尾不明顯。文法、用字、拼字毛病多,顯著影響辭意之表達翻譯

總分
(20分)

However, there is a great deal of advantages about traveling, so I sincerely recommend that you should take a travel someday!

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內容
(5分)

總分
(20分)

約請多位經驗豐富的閱卷委員對每份試卷進行初、複閱工作,而且與研究小組共同遴選學測與指考評分樣例各9份,撰寫各樣例之得分辯明,學測:特優1份、優2份、可3份、差1份、劣2份;指考:特優1份、優1份、可2份、差2份、劣3份。

組織
(5分)

說明:內容太少,段削發展全無章法。因文法、用字、拼字毛病多,嚴重影響辭意之表達。字數不足,另扣一分。

字彙、拼字
(4分)

學測英文作文評分樣例

總分
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Many people like to read books because we can learn a lot of information from it. However, sometimes it´s not enough. For example翻譯社 when the author described how spectacular the view is, we can´t feel how it is, since we fail to experience it personally. At this moment, all we have to do is go traveling. Only traveling can solve our confusion and satisfy our curious heart. When we go traveling翻譯社 we can extend our sight翻譯社 know things that we never know and even learn some lesson from it.

In fact.I wish go to Japen again, If I can go to Japen in the November to see the rain, I just keep butiful mood in the

採整體式評分,分為五品級:特優(19-20分)、優(15-18分)、可(10-14分)、差(5-9分)、劣(0-4分),閱卷委員於浏覽完考生試卷後,於腦海裡產生一個分數,再以各分項評分標準(表一)檢閱是不是符合整體印象分數。別的,字數明顯不足,扣1分翻譯未分段,扣1分;寫多段,不扣分。

Travel Is The Best Teacher

文法、句構
(4分)

體例
(2分)

字彙、拼字
(4分)

When you saw the romantic EiffelTower in the movies翻譯社 or watched the Great Wall of China on TV, have you ever imagined that you could admire such specific constructions on the sense some day? The advantages of traveling is a lot. First, traveling can make us open our eyes翻譯社 we can see the senery not through the media, but by ourselves. How wonderful that you can appreciate breathtaking senses just in front of them! Second, with the advanced education翻譯社 we have known a wide variety of knowledges about many countries. Such as history, climate and even customs, but if we never been the places, it is no use to get so many informations.

字彙、拼字
(4分)

When it got darker and darker outside, he knew that he had to go home. So much did he drank that he couldn´t even drive home on his own. He then walked on the side of the road and tried to find a taxi to take him home. He waved to the cars, shouted out something翻譯社 and even ran onto the road with his body turning round. Not long after he did these翻譯社 here came a car. It stopped in front of him, and he got on the car without hesitation. And soon, he fell asleep.

字彙、拼字
(4分)

文法、句構
(4分)

組織
(5分)

申明:1.將以下兩句中文翻譯成適當之英文,並將謎底寫在「答案卷」上翻譯
2.未按題意翻譯者,不予計分翻譯
1.全球糧食危機已活著界很多區域造成嚴重的社會問題。
2.專家警告華碩翻譯公司們不該該再將食物價格低廉視為天經地義。

說明:內容太少,行文不流通,因文法、用字、拼字錯誤太多,嚴重影響辭意表達翻譯字數不足,另扣一分。

1

字彙、拼字
(4分)

總分
(20分)

學測編號5:可-14

申明:略提主題,但完全沒有成長,幾無內容可言翻譯文章太短僅二句,沒法判斷英文作文的能力。字數不足,另扣一分翻譯

One evening the man went to attend friend´s marry ceremony, he drinks a lot of wine, and gulp face to host.The host very angry because he so not polite.

The man came out and saw him with anger.

本題型考試考生應用英文辭彙、句型與語法臉色達意的能力。第一句評量考生使用高中經常使用辭彙(如:global, crisis, created, serious social problems翻譯社 areas of the world等)及基本句型(含主詞、動詞、受詞、副詞潤色語)的能力。第二句是評量考生利用高中經常使用辭彙(如:experts, warn, take for granted翻譯社 not any more等)及含有名詞子句之句型的能力翻譯試題之參考謎底及評分標準,請見以下申明 1

申明:雖有主題,但相幹敘述未能成長;不但文法毛病多〈時態前後不一〉,用字、拼字毛病亦多,嚴重影響文意之表達;字數不足,另扣一分翻譯

5

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5

文法、句構
(4分)

組織
(5分)

字彙、拼字
(4分)

說明:主題清晰。組織完全,重點尚分明翻譯文法句構毛病稍多翻譯但用字、拼字偶有毛病。

學測編號3:優-16

總分
(20分)

內容
(5分)

字彙、拼字
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內容
(5分)

編制
(2分)

資料起原 http://www.ceec.edu.tw/

內容
(5分)

0

3.5

3

1.5

16

長久以來,社會大眾對於學測或指考英文作文部門的評分,希望在講授與考試能有所本,考生也許可預估自己成就等等身分下,「94指定科目英文考科非選擇題研發計畫」分外委託四所高中與一所高職高三學生共約195位,以93年學測或93年指考英文作文為題,撰寫短文以作為樣例利用,而且獲得作答學生同意得以將其短文用於相幹學術著作、或在研究會議中展示;作答學測考生共94位、指考101位;對於作答了局利用情形,學測贊成者共71位、分歧意者8位、未填者12位,指考贊成者76位、分歧意者4位、未填者18位。

5

文法、句構
(4分)

文法、句構
(4分)

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1.5

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1

5

(1) 本大題總分8分,每小題滿分4分。
(2) 每一個毛病扣0.5分,扣完為止翻譯
(3) 相同之拼字毛病只扣分一次。
(4) 句首未大寫或標點符號不當,各扣0.5分,只扣一次翻譯

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4

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17

體例
(2分)

3

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2

4

 

總分
(20分)

After my trip to Malaysia, I realized that many countries in Asia are prospering, while Taiwan seems to be going backward. I also remind myself that we should never look down on others, and we should equip ourselves with knowledge and unique perspectives, so that we may be able to be outstanding rather than being overwhelmed by the others. We should be more active in our learning and try to set up our goals.

One evening, my brother dressed himself up in order to attend his friend´s weding. When he arrived at the resturant, he came across a classmate who hadn´t connected with him since he graduated from college. My brother was so happy that he drank a large amount of wine.

What tain make me the benefit?It is let me learn more and more folklore, and look the different view in this butiful word.

體例
(2分)

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